This is a beautiful poem. So sad =(.beautiful writin. You're talented. Keep it up!! Lotsaalove-xxx-

This was really great. I loved this poem. Truly sad,but yet so beautiful. I can relate to your sorrow of loosing someone so important to you. Thanks for the comments on my work. I know I should leave, but it`s not that easy. I have a little babygirl with the man I am with. Can`t just break up her home :) Well..anyway, loved your poem. Keep it up :)