Breathe taking Emily. Wow.. you took my breath away with this wonderful poem. Beautiful written. Oh how it flows, how it flows. It's unbelievable. I'm impressed Emily.. Once again I'm impressed. Very very very well done sweety, I loved it! Keep it up hun -xxx-

You know what can I say that I havent already said - nice flow, well written? It's a brilliant poem - all your poems are great and you've got alot of talent. The sad thing is the topic and I want you to know I'm for you =)

My heart doesn’t belong anywhere else...
but the fact that i poisoned every part of you is something i now have to live with
i miss you
hell i f**king miss you
but i deserve it...i want to suffer not because i chose to but because if i dont then theres no justice that takes place on this earth
theres so many things ive recently wanted to tell you but i havent n why i dont know but i dont want you to be sad
yeah what we had was f**king awesome n i loved every moment of it
but i was tearing you appart n theres so much that happened that was still on my mind n i felt wrong to be with you while i was still living in the past maybe if i get over it oh i duna
i love the poem though
love u xxxxxx

Really well written peice, great flow thoughout.

Oh my gosh i loved this poem seriously wow im speechless.
Great job.

OMFG!! I LOVE THIS!!! It is all so good. Such powerful words!! I like these lines the most:

Nothing seemed more logical than giving you my heart.

These tears dont fall because im sad. They fall because every drop is drenched in every moment i ever loved you ....

Wow, wow, wow. I am speechless.. even though I am blabbing on. 5/5 forsure!! I would give more if I could.

Tiffany.xox.

Aw so sad and so sweet....5/5 i love it to death your a great writer hun keep it up!! btw you have a very professional sounding name ...

Hey emy. i have'nt reli had the chance the read many of ur poems. but i will have 2 start. :D ...i reli like this poem although it is quite sad, but with poems i relate to them more if they are sad. as u saw from mine. gd job lady! love ya jess xxxxx

I LOVE THIS ONE excellent job i love it
awesome poem
great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love
tabby

Again I thought it had a very dark beauty to it... it kinda threw me off with the word *F$ck* and made the dark beauty stop for awhile, but came back near the end. good job:)