Omg this poem is absolutley wonderful!!!! I love the irony in it is great!!! keep up the wonderful work
love Britt

Wow for the first time i have found someone thats style is there own and uses the english language in such a way that it takes my breath away keep up the great work... I usually say somewhere here to check out my poems but my work is nothing compared to yours... And if this is short sorry but im commenting from my cellphone but ill try to comment properly soon -joe

Aww i really like this.
u'll find him.
or more like he will find u ?!?!

Awww the end bit was so unexpecting haha well done on a great peice of work! um is tis spose to be like this...."and my eyelashes brush against my cheek" is it against his cheek haha owell
xoxoxo justwant2smile

Omg this is the awesomeest peom ever i can totally relate love it