Nowhere to Turn

This was very good. you described feelings so well and the repetitiveness of the one verse was almost necessary when i got to the end of it. 5/5

Very powerful peice brilliantly written and composed. there is so muchh feeling within the words very strongly expressed so that the reader can feel what you felt when writing, really shows that you are a tallented writer when you can invoke feelings within your readers lie this peice can.

5/5

Hey, i really really like this poem ! your talented keep it up ! thanks for the help with the friend, it hurts i've been her friend for life and now all of the sudden shes b.i.t.c.h.y to me, and like acts like i'm the one being meanto her, when its the other way around....lol..anyway stupid fights, stupid girl...keep up the awesome work ! check out some of my poems sometime ! hugs-hayley

Thanks everyone *hugs* Thank you for caring *hugs again*

I can relate to this one. I feel like this a lot. But it's a great poem, and it's well written. Thanks so much for the comment on my poem