OMG sweetie, this is filled with so much pain and hurt..... keeping looking to the sky, HE will guide you and lead you in the right direction, you just need to hear HIM. Keep on writing.....

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Just want you to know that I am not a "religious" person and I don't preach, but I am spiritual and whenever I have problems, I always talk to HIM and pray for HIS help.

Returning home
to a 'loving' drunk
A few hits later
My spirit has sunk

That phrase rhymed really well and got a lot of emotion out. Nice work on the poem altogether though. I felt your pain and everyone knows that is an accomplishment to writing. Nice work. Keep it up.
xoxo

Wow jl, great write.
sorry i havent commented in a loongg time, i'll try to catch up. but i really liked how u repeated that part, it gave it a powerful feeling. i dont know what else to say, it was a very meaningful poem, keep it up!:) thx for your sweet comments!
xxxxweepingxxxx

I can relate to this one. I feel like this a lot. But it's a great poem, and it's well written. Thanks so much for the comment on my poem

Thanks everyone *hugs* Thank you for caring *hugs again*

Hey, i really really like this poem ! your talented keep it up ! thanks for the help with the friend, it hurts i've been her friend for life and now all of the sudden shes b.i.t.c.h.y to me, and like acts like i'm the one being meanto her, when its the other way around....lol..anyway stupid fights, stupid girl...keep up the awesome work ! check out some of my poems sometime ! hugs-hayley

Very powerful peice brilliantly written and composed. there is so muchh feeling within the words very strongly expressed so that the reader can feel what you felt when writing, really shows that you are a tallented writer when you can invoke feelings within your readers lie this peice can.

5/5

This was very good. you described feelings so well and the repetitiveness of the one verse was almost necessary when i got to the end of it. 5/5