Without you

by twiztid4life   Dec 31, 2005


(this poem might not rhyme but oh well)

before you died i thought i was the luckiest girl alive,
having you there to protect me from the world
giving me shelter, being the dad i never really had
then October 19th came and you left me
you left me standing there alone in the darkness
now it seems like theres no hope for me, like theres no reason for living
you were my world, I'm lost without you
i feel so vulnerable, and so alone, so scared, like no one's there
I'm trying my hardest to move on with my life,
but its hard you had a wonderful family and a wonderful wife who loves you,
you didn't have to leave it wasn't your time, you were only 55
you were suppose 2 buy me my first truck, and teach me how 2 drive,
why did you have to die?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    It doesnt have to rhyme to bring out the meaning. though some parts do. i like how you wrote this. it was like a tear for every word. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Aveena

    Its not badd
    keep it up
    you had alot of emotions in it !
    niice i know how you feel...i;ve lsot a lot of people close to me.

  • 18 years ago

    by twiztid4life

    It doesnt rhyme but w/e i did my best n' its how i feel bcuz my papa raised me n' im 16 now i turned 16 in december n' he meant the world 2 me n' he died in october at the age of 55 i miss him so much R.I.P. Papa (Paul Picard) i love you

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