Winding Down

by Becky   Dec 31, 2005


With each drop of blood that falls
i hear a clock tick

slowly counting down the moments
that i have left to live

i begin to realize
that this is truly the end

i start to curse whoever made this clock
whoever let it begin to tick

for i thought that it was over
but it has only just begun

i can't leave now
oh god now

please i need more time
please don't let my clock wind down

i now realize
that i am still young

i still have a life to live
whether bad or good

it still needs to be lived
i am not leaving
anytime soon

i have no idea where this came from i don't like it very much except the first part. i haven't written in a while so please comment and i will get back to you. i dunno i was just sitting here and said the first two lines and then wrote it loll. thanks lots appreciated. *~*Becky*~*

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  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    I loved it! the whole clock and time idea was really effective! u could almost imagine being there with the clock ticking. it portrays the sudden panic really well too, and the fact that u cant stop time. excellent! 5/5
    lots of luv,
    xxEmmaxx