Comments : First Time

  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    Hey autumn, great poem huni, very sweet, r u alright? i accepted u into the club, im always here for ya if u need anythin!

  • 19 years ago

    by gasping for air

    This is an average poem.. the wording's a lil off...and its a lil short.. and i would put some more description in there... put some more stuff about your love and that kinda thing... but you have a good topic!!
    keep it up
    amanda