If Only I Could Live

by Mezmeryz   Dec 31, 2005


I'd destroy the past
Present would hold no pain
I wouldn't let the worries last.
If only I could live life again

I'd stay with you all
And keep out the strife
I wouldn't let you fall.
If only I could live life.

You'd be on cloud nine
All mistakes; I'd forgive
Your life would be fine;
If only I could live.

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  • 16 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    This short...but it's also a good write...thank you for posting.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Oh wow, short but powerful, the structure of the poem is so well done and it flows wonderfully, it is so sad though... keep up the writing and thanks for your comments they meant so much x

  • 18 years ago

    by suppressed

    Exellent poem i luved it thanks for comenting on mine. i really do think your talented keep it up
    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Another beautiful piece!!!!
    you're amazing. I luved ur poetry. there r so much of talented poets here. good luck with the comings!!!
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  • 18 years ago

    by newlun

    Great poem

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