With no one.

by M MEM   Dec 31, 2005


I wait,
I hope.
But I have no one,
I try to be close,
But right when I'm about to tell you,
Something happens.
I no longer have someone to love,
A friend to hug,
Because no one knows me anymore.
There are the people I'd jump in front of a bullet for,
But they don't know that.
They don't know how much I love them,
It gets lost along the way.
I was dying,
I was dying in front of you,
And nobody noticed.
Nobody cared.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    Good poem.. but i think the ending could use a little.... working on...? hope you dont mind that creative criticism. Thank you for the comment i appreciate it

    ~David

  • 18 years ago

    by Purple

    Have you ever let yourself break down in public, half realizing your doing it to see if anyone notices? People are too caught up in their own life to ketch a simple tear, or frown.

    A while ago I decided I'd be willing to give up my life so some one else could live. Even the person I hate the most deserves a chance to live their life, and I wount feel guilty about not helping them later. It'd be the type of thing that eats me up inside. I'd jump the bullet for anyone, that's part of my weakness I guess.

    Great poem, once again my life has been pulled out and displayed by a good peice of writting, it happens.

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    I can relate there, good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    I can relate there, good job

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