by Kevin
Its sad and true for many people |
by Drew
Just remember the eyes are the window to your soul and you have a great soul i can tell by what you write please keep up the great work |
by NissY
I can understand your pain, your lose and gain, dear, I've been there and it aint a pretty sight. |
I can relate to it. The repetition of the first stanza at the end is very effective. This poem is filled with sadness, and the emotions are nicely expressed. |