Comments : Dont take your love away

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a t0uching piece. very well written. h0pe things w0rk 0ut. wishing u all the best f0r the new year. keep up the great w0rk =)

    l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Very sweet poem.. and I know the feeling of loving someone sooo much.... it almost hurts and you would do anything for them... you sure captured the emotion very well.. and thanx you so much for your comment on my poem.. lol yeah the title is a little weird but thats why I picked it.. so it would help it stand out.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tortured Soul

    Beautiful job, this poem was amazing. It has so much feeling.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    An emotional piece that works well.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    That was really nice..liked every bit of it.

    great poem indeed...
    all the best and take care