Omg, u ok rain? i mean we havn't spoken for a long time but you gotta be ok? wt happened? gd poem and gd rhyme btw, a 5 as usual, but seriously im worried now, your poems used to be so happy, wts going on?

This is good, it is really free-form, in that it sounds like you had all these feelings to convey in here. Really nice work.