Good job poody i like dis one ...it makes me see a piicture in my head nd shit lol..

Great Poem...truly amazing. Take care and keep it up, thanks for your comment on mine.

Great poem!! i love all your poems keep it up!! :)

Aye dis was sweet hehe...lyked dis....
keep it up tc...
p.s thnks for da comment
love dia mwaz xoxo