*hug* brilliant poem.

Wowowowowow!!! brilliziaer!!! flawless rhyming, which made such a good rhythm!!!! wowowoweeeee!!! crazily fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! me lurvo mucho.

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Flows wonderfully, got to agree with Strange the rhyming is excellent!

Oooooooooooohh......soo well written! it was like drinking really tasty wine. but REALLY tasty wine. i feel soo enebriated.
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An amazingly dark poem, just reading some of ur poems for the first time and they're excellent. in this poem, i'm guessing, bud were the red n green hairs relating to the anger and jealousy mentioned? just a guess. anyway well done, i loved it