I like it its good kepp writing.......i love to read them i LOVE to and this one kinda connects wit me ..u know y well keep going keep ur head up and keep happy lov ya ~beckey~

Its a really good poem and its hard to look for anything constructive to add. One thing i've found is with your rhyming couplets in there, you have to be careful about meter (having one line with too many syllables and/or different rhythm to the other one). Rhyming couplets are hard to do simply because a little bit off in meter and it can stuff up how it sounds, but if done well can be effective. So keep it up, keep trying and keep writing, its a good piece with a great ending and a well chosen title.
--Broken.

Why thank you, I got to practice that couplet thingy :D