Nice poem, :D. Greetz Rik

I like this its really good.

Its really good, the ryming is off, but you get a weird feeling when you read it..its cool. 5/5,. you should check out some of my new poems!

Hey thanks 4 voting my poem a 5 it was writen for my parents cus all they do is fight but really thanks it means alot

Hey thanks 4 voting my poem a 5 it was writen for my parents cus all they do is fight but really thanks it means alot

I feel like i can relate 2 ur poem cus my father didnt love or care about me and my mom is remarried thats wat the poem u rated was about keep up the good work just remeber that not all men are like that

That was great i feel the same to every little thing that hurts gets to me great poem i loved it 5/5

thanks for commenting on my poems

Though you are no more than 2 years behind me, you write as if your much older... if what you write is what you've been through. Stay strong. Life is rough, and sometimes it feels as if no way to ever escape. But stay strong, my dear. And keep writing.

Srry it took so long 2 return tha favor,
but this was great!