MidNiGht kiss(kinDa LonG)

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Jan 1, 2006


Today passed so fast
i saw u at the mall with your boys
seeing you look at me that way
my whole day it destroys

when i went outside to talk on the phone
u walked outside too to wait for your "ride"
i wanted to kiss you and hold u tight
but i heard my heart crying inside

so i slowly walked away
pretending like you were a stranger
but i was looking back at you with tears in my eyes
thinking back on those hard good-byes

i got home and had just jumped in my bed
when you called to "talk"
you said that all u wanted to do
is take a simple walk

i couldn't go, so i had to say no
to the past i can't return
my heart back you have
to earn

its almost new years
its ten to twelve
and your the only thing
going thru my mind

i just wish that i could spend
the rest of my life with you
but whats going on in my mind and heart
you have no clue

i take a minute and look at your picture
thinking of the memories that we made
but then i think of how
with my heart you played

its five till twelve
and i don't see you anywhere near
but believe it or not i see our
future very clear

every things going to be OK
we'll work everything out
my heart has to understand that
your the one person that i can't be without

the past has been a nightmare
but i hope that the future will be better
when i get home i promise
to write you one final letter

in the letter i will say
that to me you meant the world
and every breath i took
it was a new chapter in my book

thanks for a year of happiness
and a year that i will never forget
nothing that i have done with you
i promise that i will not regret

when the clock strikes twelve
the past will be erased
you are going to have other girls
but i know for a fact that i can't be replaced

I'll always miss you and u will always be in my heart
on our beautiful past i will always reminisce
i just can't imagine living my life without you
and not being able to share that amazing midnight kiss

*I wrote this for Miguel...i guess my girls can tell well..this is the last thing that i have to say...tel me what y'all think*

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  • 16 years ago

    by NEYDA

    THATS REALLY GOOD..UR TaLENTED BUT GUYS AINT WORTH IT...LIFE GOES ON WITH OR WITH OUT DEM BY UR SIDE..I VE KINDA BEEN THREW THE SAME THING BUT I MADE IT THREW. MY EX WAS WITH ME 4 2 YRS ND WE BOTH STILL KINDA LIKE EACHTOHER BUT SUFRI MUCHO WITH HIM SO IM LEARNIN HOW 2 MOVE ON...GUYS CAN B DIKS AT POINTS BUT ALWAYS KNO THAT WITH UR TRU GURLIES ULL MAKE IT THREW

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    WoW.. thats a beautifully written poem =)! First off your title: Perfect at first I didnt understand it but then as I continued to read I got it and I think that is great title for this poem.. Also your poem flowed very well. I love how its based on a true experience ( i know how painful it can really for that to happen to you so I can realate to this) I loved how you described how you felt and what was happening around you! And it seems like you put your heart into this and a lot of emotion. . . awesome job =)

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Aw!!!! That was so cute, yet....kinda actually depressing, lol! I think that its amazing that I can write a page long story about death and whatnot and not really find that as depressing as this....lol. Prolly cuz yours is more real, but anyhow. It was a great poem and totally romantic considering the whole New Years Eve Kisses stuff. Beautiful actually! So good job, and thanks for demonstrating how a good poem is written!

    Thanks for sharing!!!

    ~Sierra

    __Meatball Hoagie#2__

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Ok That happened B4 Yesterday...But I had to put it up...I am really sad cus I talk to him....he says we need to talk more and if he can see me tonight or something...But I know whats going on...and wow I guess I wasnt the only one feeling bad yesterday....you'll b ok. I feel bad now cus u feelin sad. I dont want u hurt. But things will get better I promise...Te quiero mucho...Well this is a really great poem...Cus I kno it came from ur heart. Keep it up ma. Amazin job!!!!!!

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job hun very kind sad though. i hope things get better for you in the new year and just remembe alwyas listen to you heart. 5.5

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