Nice job hun very kind sad though. i hope things get better for you in the new year and just remembe alwyas listen to you heart. 5.5

Ok That happened B4 Yesterday...But I had to put it up...I am really sad cus I talk to him....he says we need to talk more and if he can see me tonight or something...But I know whats going on...and wow I guess I wasnt the only one feeling bad yesterday....you'll b ok. I feel bad now cus u feelin sad. I dont want u hurt. But things will get better I promise...Te quiero mucho...Well this is a really great poem...Cus I kno it came from ur heart. Keep it up ma. Amazin job!!!!!!

::MELI::

Aw!!!! That was so cute, yet....kinda actually depressing, lol! I think that its amazing that I can write a page long story about death and whatnot and not really find that as depressing as this....lol. Prolly cuz yours is more real, but anyhow. It was a great poem and totally romantic considering the whole New Years Eve Kisses stuff. Beautiful actually! So good job, and thanks for demonstrating how a good poem is written!

Thanks for sharing!!!

~Sierra

__Meatball Hoagie#2__

WoW.. thats a beautifully written poem =)! First off your title: Perfect at first I didnt understand it but then as I continued to read I got it and I think that is great title for this poem.. Also your poem flowed very well. I love how its based on a true experience ( i know how painful it can really for that to happen to you so I can realate to this) I loved how you described how you felt and what was happening around you! And it seems like you put your heart into this and a lot of emotion. . . awesome job =)

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THATS REALLY GOOD..UR TaLENTED BUT GUYS AINT WORTH IT...LIFE GOES ON WITH OR WITH OUT DEM BY UR SIDE..I VE KINDA BEEN THREW THE SAME THING BUT I MADE IT THREW. MY EX WAS WITH ME 4 2 YRS ND WE BOTH STILL KINDA LIKE EACHTOHER BUT SUFRI MUCHO WITH HIM SO IM LEARNIN HOW 2 MOVE ON...GUYS CAN B DIKS AT POINTS BUT ALWAYS KNO THAT WITH UR TRU GURLIES ULL MAKE IT THREW