Great poem...i can so relate....thats when me and my baby started going out...i loved 2005...but this year is gonna be way better...lol

Really good. Loved it. i can relate. it is so beuatiful when someone tells you dat dey love you and really mean it. Very touching keep up the good work. it was excellent

Very Long but I like it alot, Tells a wonderful story

That was sweet. Generally I detest love poems, so you did very well! There was only one time where the rhyme scheme felt forced and that was here:

And your heart was beating like it just won a race,
And you were holding me and touching my face,

I remember after you said it, I just quietly sat there,
I didn't say anything back, I bet for you that was a scare,

It's not atrocious, I just think that it seems a little facked. Other than that, I really liked the beginning, it rhymed but it wasn't in a conventional format. Nice job, keep it up.

I really enjoyed this...I just liked the way it fit together...nice job...
Emma 5/5