Comments : Burn useless soul.

  • 18 years ago

    by Austin

    I love ur poem, i hope u write more

  • 18 years ago

    by stephyG

    Hey great poem.. thw words r really fantastic and i love da way its written!! well done..Stephy :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Very deep and powerful...... painful as well....

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Great poem my friend. Thank you so much for your sweet and kind comment on my last poem. Coming form such a great poet...It meant a lot to me! Take care my friend.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cait

    Wow really good, i liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by rachel harris

    Omg.. I absolutely loved it! your really good at writting poems.. and the words and details you use is great.. so keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    WOO Hun you're back, I missed youu :) I love your poetry and im so happy you're back hehe, i missed reading your poetry, make sure you keep on writing for mee, hehe, anyways this is a pretty poem i loved it my dear, take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Angelo

    Nice poem.... im not poet writter, i love to read a poem... i reli appreciate ur work... Good Luck... GOD BLESS US..

  • 18 years ago

    by CINDY

    Nice poem really like hope to see more of yours go bigger

  • 18 years ago

    by Kandace

    Wow this is an amazing poem!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lanie

    This is so perfect!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ed

    Wow... this is one of the best poems ive read so far. blew me away...

  • 18 years ago

    by Innocent Danger

    Omg
    this poem sadly enoght sounds like me ... :-( but i rlly love this poem !! member that !

  • 18 years ago

    by megan

    Your poem is really good i really liked it you should keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    OMFG! I love this poem, its the best thing ive read in forever! keep writing, youre very good at it. id like you to read and rate some of my poems too please.

  • 18 years ago

    by ...Jasmine...

    WOW... thats deep... i'm not sure how you come up with that but i LOVED it... absolutely perfect... WOW!

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Woah....very very dark!! haha i love it!! its just so full of aingst and all that hah it was great with the flow and everything...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Scary, i think this is a lil off from your personality. i enjoyed the rhymes and all, but the story is killin.

  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

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    Rhyme scheme. Not bad. You had A LOT of rhymes in there, and the ending was, indeed different, but I still managed to like this poem. Has a good structure and flow too. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole

    Wow !