Comments : I danced with thee

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Powerful, raw and energetic. Beautifully done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Definitely powerful....... wonderful write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow! Powerfully written, absolutely perfect! Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Peter DeJesse

    Very renaissance. Exciting to read. Beautifully written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Very powerful, very emotional! Well written Katie, well written indeed!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Katie
    Beautifully done, such a powerful poem. Great job...

    Love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Wonderful poem. i loved the last two stanzas in the poem exspecially the last two lines. i liked how you talked about the lions roar in the poem before this and relate it to love then wonderfully take the lions roar and relate it to this poem as well. great write.

    ~Jacklyn

  • This was very good. You use your words really well. Very good ideas i think it read well all the way through.

    xxx cici xxx

  • This Poem Was Breathtakingly Beautiful! I Loved The Way You Wrote It With Parrable Terms (If Thats Spelt Correctly) It Was Extremely Creative Overall, I Loved Your Use Of Vocabulary! Some People Write Words Like That But Have No Substance With It, Yours Actually Had Substance And Talent! I'm Blown Away And Empressed And Happy Overall....To Have Talent Like Yours On This Site 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    I love your poems.... they're just like mine(my others) some of my poems are deep, mostly about love but something like yours

  • 18 years ago

    by Colton

    Great job on this poem, I think you're one of the best poets on this site Katie!

  • 18 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    This is an amazing poem and so I read some of your others and you're such an incredible writer, nice one! I've added you to my favourites!

    Em xxx

    ps. I read on your profile that you're in hospital so get well soon!

  • 18 years ago

    by shattered and broken

    Wow I really like this!