Comments : Long Friendship (Dedicated to Adam Yost) 4-5-05

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    It's a good one love this line So cold and lost
    Crowded up in this box
    You might wanna take this work and put it in to a real poem. To me is half poema and the other half is like your saying it to him. But other than that it's great!