Beneath these angel eyes

by Miss Pipp   Jan 2, 2006


I'm so sick of being perfect when no one really cares.
why bother with all you people that won't see me for who i am.
if you only want me for how i look or how i act maybe you should see what lies beneath these angel eyes.
more that you could understand
the pain, the hurt
all caused by the people who only want to see this act.
i can't believe you didn't see beneath these angel eyes.
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  • 18 years ago

    by deeesem

    Just a thought* It was good though.

  • 18 years ago

    by deeesem

    Shouldn't you be judged by how you act? Maybe you should let people in a little more, then they might see you for the real you. Just a though.

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow a great poem for a person like me i can relete to this poem your good very very good poet keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    You shouldn't let other people change the way you are...you don't have to be perfect...just be yourself...this poem sends a good message to everyone..great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Yeah im agreeing with Alex^^ i love the message but a little longer wouldnt hurt... I can relate to this well.. great job as always

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*