Understand...I have feelings for you.

by the love of another fills my soul   Jan 2, 2006


Without you,I'd fall apart.When I talk to you,
It's like talking to an angel.You're like my own personal superman coming to save the day.I love you so much.And I hope truly realize how much you mean to me.You my life,You're my world.You're my friend when I'm sad.When I'm sad and Lonely,You comfort me with every word you speak.Baby, can't you see how much you truly mean to me?I'd never do anything to hurt you.And I hope you feel the same way about me.It all seems to good to be true,But you're the one who never makes me feels blue.And I hope you really do realize how much you mean to me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Well I can't really offer much advice. It flows nicely, like a letter, not like a poem. But that's just my opinion. I also am a fan of some sort of format, and this is just a string of sentences. The words are great and so meaningful, I just don't particulary like the way you put them together. I'm not trying to be mean! Just trying to give you some constructive criticism. Take care and keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by the love of another fills my soul

    I'd like to know why it was voted a 1/5,,,,if u have suggestions to make it better...please do tell me.I'd like the advice to

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