I'd like to know why it was voted a 1/5,,,,if u have suggestions to make it better...please do tell me.I'd like the advice to

Well I can't really offer much advice. It flows nicely, like a letter, not like a poem. But that's just my opinion. I also am a fan of some sort of format, and this is just a string of sentences. The words are great and so meaningful, I just don't particulary like the way you put them together. I'm not trying to be mean! Just trying to give you some constructive criticism. Take care and keep writing!