That was rlly good. u should determine whether ur in love or LUST. i hav been known to connfuse the two. sometimes i was in lust for years at a time. if u love him tell him tho. b/c if u dont u will regret it alot. i should kno. well, that was good. keep writing

I think it was a sweet poem that came from the heart. If you love him, let him know. That is the best advise I can give you. I was with the love of my life for 14 wonderful years, and many times we had to be a part. What I think is the most important to make any relationship work is to always be honest, and tell how your feeling. If you are ment to be,then the distance and the time your apart will only make you stronger. Hope things work out for you.

Thats good too....sound good...
Well...hmm i presume that wasnt me lol....Keep up the good work babii...
xox

=( aww hun... I can feel the pain behind your words. I hope that you're okay... just remember that if it's meant to be, it will work out in the end... and this is an amazing poem, even if you don't think so. You've got a lot of talent, keep up the great work hun.