by Cari Jan 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Sometimes I can't breathe. Sometimes I can't think. Sometimes I am gone from everything. |
by Amy
Hey this is excellent! truely remarkable. i luv it |
Really deep and full of emotion..Cutting really isn't the best choice to solve your problem try writing poems when your stressed it helps trust me I know from experience.. |
by amelia
Amazing stuff... very thought & feeling provoking |
Hun, excellent poem. ok, by the way this sounds, you're thinking of killimg yourself. please don't. if you need to talk, message me. |
You might wanna change the "to" into a "too" in the first stanza...other then that its excellent 5/5 |