The End of Me

by Cari   Jan 2, 2006


Sometimes I can't breathe. Sometimes I can't think. Sometimes I am gone from everything.
The pain is just to strong.

So now as I sit here before you to put my soul on the line, I can't breathe nor think about how I am to tell you what I have come to say.

I have to tell you but there are no words for me to use. Instead I will show you. Give me a blade, give me a knife and I will show you how I live my life.

Tears run down my cheeks just like the blood runs down my arm. No one will remember me in a couple of weeks.

I promise you'll move on. Possibly I will break that promise so here is some advice: When you can't breathe, when you can't think, when you are gone from everything, think about how you want it to be. Don't continue this cycle because it ends with the end of me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Hey this is excellent! truely remarkable. i luv it
    dont hurt ya self. k. i hope this is all fiction

    luv amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Really deep and full of emotion..Cutting really isn't the best choice to solve your problem try writing poems when your stressed it helps trust me I know from experience..
    !^I Love Being In Love^!

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Amazing stuff... very thought & feeling provoking
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Hun, excellent poem. ok, by the way this sounds, you're thinking of killimg yourself. please don't. if you need to talk, message me.
    5/5
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    You might wanna change the "to" into a "too" in the first stanza...other then that its excellent 5/5

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