I gave it a 4 becasue I didn't like how you kept using the boy/girl...but I bet when I read the other ones I get why you did it [cause I'm sure you have a reason] then I'll go back and give it a different rating...but I did like this poem I really want to know more and read the other part(s)....If you get a chance check out my poems and tell me what you think PLZ =)