The Pain

by Richard Vivard   Jan 2, 2006


The Pain I feel is like a cold nail.
The Pain I feel is like a bee sting.
It keep on coming back when my dad here.
Now I'm lost without a life.
The pain is ruining my life and my family.
Now I Try to keep The Pain inside of my body.
Not close to the one I love.
I'm barely Standing on my feet.
I'm down to one last breathe.
God help my pain go away before I die.
I feel this constantly every day.
I feel my body turning cold.
Like my heart is getting sold.
There is nothing to hold on to anymore.
Now I have to tear out my cold heart.
The Pain I feel is so deep in.
So deep in my lost soul.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lynn

    Wat the f..k??spell check over here.. NNNNN-e-way..awsome poem i give it a f..kin 5. yep yep.really good writing,i feel u though u sound like u deal with some sh.t..well the out come of all the pain and hurt is strength..even when it seems like your only getting weaker,try and change the way u think,good poem,check out mine,click my name. stay up. im out

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    Your poem was pretty good. If I were you; you might want to read it over yourself becasue I think your ideas got ahead of you typing and u left a few key words [i.e is, was, a ,the....] That why I gave it a 4 but if you edit it I would definitely give it a 5. If you get a chance I would like it if you check out my poems and tell me what you think

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