Awww, this is good! i love how its kinda simple and choppy and doesnt rhyme...it fits perfect with the style of the poem and what your trying to say. berry berry good!

Awwwe..yea thats sad,i hate that when the things u wanna say are the hardest things to say..but EVERY THING happens for a reason so may be somethings are better off un saiad or said.. stay up k? im out..