Broken heart

by ♥s|a|r|a|h♥   Jan 2, 2006


Happiness inside she cant help but hide
all the hurt and pain shes been caused
don't let her down; else she will again slide
back into her hole; where shes been so long paused

i tried my best to mend her heart
but it was shattered into a million pieces
a savage animal yet again; ripped it apart
done it all; just need to iron the creases

but there were pieces that were still lost
never to be allocated; left back in the past
she forced herself to smile but at what cost?
gonna keep searching but i don't know how long she'll last

ill try to patch her up with a piece of mine
ill give it her all if thats what it takes
a nod, a smile; i just need a little sign
why let her heart break?

broken her heart; so many times
shes carried on through the cruelty, the pain,
and the evil heart game crimes
all her loss; all your gain

tried to fix her; tried to make her smirk
but shes dead to the world
not even a little quirk
crosses her face; not now, not for a long time

i know what she is feeling
even though she acts alright
i know th pain shes concealing
but she keeps putting up a fight

she has no antidote for her pain
it increase with every thought
nice girl; such a shame
being used; played like a game

i try and help her, i do care
i just want her to know
with me; her thoughts she can share
each day; my love for her will grow

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  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Very sweet poem...the flow was ok...maybe its just me, but in some places it felt a bit off...in the 3rd last stanza i noticed that you wrote "i know th pain shes concealing"
    i think its "the"...just something i noticed:)
    Good poem..really nice work:)

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. I loved it! Lol. I liked most of the flow throughout the whole thing, I liked the words and...everything! Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha