by ♥s|a|r|a|h♥ Jan 2, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Happiness inside she cant help but hide |
Very sweet poem...the flow was ok...maybe its just me, but in some places it felt a bit off...in the 3rd last stanza i noticed that you wrote "i know th pain shes concealing" |
Aww. I loved it! Lol. I liked most of the flow throughout the whole thing, I liked the words and...everything! Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo |