Aww. I loved it! Lol. I liked most of the flow throughout the whole thing, I liked the words and...everything! Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Very sweet poem...the flow was ok...maybe its just me, but in some places it felt a bit off...in the 3rd last stanza i noticed that you wrote "i know th pain shes concealing"
i think its "the"...just something i noticed:)
Good poem..really nice work:)