Good job with the poem. i like your style.

Awe.sad poem babe really, u have talent.i know how u feel when it seems like u would be fine if god would just grant u the wishes u wanted,like all the hurt and pain will be gone..but maybe some of the wishes arnt the ones for u..some of the most painful things u go through are the things that make u stronger..keep writeing that was f**kin awsome.stay up.im out

U should chek out some of mine,click on my name let me know wat u think,im out

Hey great poem.. thw words r really fantastic and i love da way its written!! well done..Stephy :)

Awwwww, that is so touchy and softy hearty to read yours.. what a great poem to tell things how it really mean.. i wish i can be happy everyday and not to feel the pain, but isnt not always perfect. i loved your poem. i hope u can write more, u jux such a good writer to say.