A question

by Miss Pipp   Jan 2, 2006


What happened to all the good times we shared?
what happened to your loveing arms?
where did you go?
why did you leave me so scared?
why cant you say it to me?
if you're gone for good
can i ask you one more thing?
i love you is that ok?
this isn't a very good poem but it explains how i feel please tell me what you think about it i always return the favour

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  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    I think it being short helped to make the point
    I can relate to this with friends in a way
    The use of lots od questions showed desperation
    Keep writing =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    I can really relate to this poem great write. O and you only commented two of my poems.. Could you please go check out Lucky to be with you.. Thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    You are good at etting your feelings down into words. (unlike that sentance lol)

    very well expressed peice

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