Beth

by Emma   Jan 2, 2006


Smiling eyes
don't be fooled
always cries

Black tears
bleeding hearts
no one really cares

Grab the blade
make a wish
hopefully all the pain will fade

Crimson pours
healing broken hearts
slowly falling to the floor

Found bleeding
only truth can be seen
a broken heart fleeing

Nothing left
of but bleeding body
of sweet little Beth

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Thax
Emma

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    Wow, really good. its really sad. emotionally written (lol) anyway, i don't have anything to say because it was really that good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This is so random but yet that's a good thing because i'm always random and stuff in my poems. You did an amazing job i really enjoyed it alot. Very sad but you get the emtion in every randomly word you put in there which was great. :) keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    Wouldn't the last line sound better like this:Nothing left
    but the bleeding body
    of sweet little Beth

    Justa suggestion!All in all,it's a beautiful concept and a cute poem:)

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Grabe the blade? Should that me Grab?
    Or no? Just wondering .. Great poem though so good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    This poem is so great i love poems in this type of set up. But peopel care never think that no one cares there is always someone who cares.

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

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