Wow~ thats is amazing I can see why you wanted people to read it..it was so good. Sad but good. Keep up the amazing work.
Juls

Good Stuff...

This poem is so great i love poems in this type of set up. But peopel care never think that no one cares there is always someone who cares.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Grabe the blade? Should that me Grab?
Or no? Just wondering .. Great poem though so good.

Wouldn't the last line sound better like this:Nothing left
but the bleeding body
of sweet little Beth

Justa suggestion!All in all,it's a beautiful concept and a cute poem:)

This is so random but yet that's a good thing because i'm always random and stuff in my poems. You did an amazing job i really enjoyed it alot. Very sad but you get the emtion in every randomly word you put in there which was great. :) keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Wow, really good. its really sad. emotionally written (lol) anyway, i don't have anything to say because it was really that good.