Sometimes cutting really isn't the only answer still a great poem...

Your poem is very deep, and i know even though you feel this way. there are people out there that do love you!
you've done an awsum job with this write.........luv em

I can totaly relate, if ya ever wanna talk msg me
thanks for reading my poem

(just to let u knw i comment on one of yr otha peoms, dis was ages ago but ma name was ~*cutie_pie_4eva*~(nadia) well i can reli relate to this...this is an awsum poem...i like it.5/5..i love your poems u got talent...
p.s thnks heaps for the comment :D,
love dia mwaz xoxo

It was well focuseed around the blade, it highlighted the sense of isolation and need for the blade.
Well done =]

Yeah i agree with azlan^^ .. but i couldnt really find the flow all that well.. maybe a little bit of rhyming would make it a little better? just offering my honest opinion but other than that it was really good.. keep it up 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Its great, it really shows your inner pain. keep writing.
-David

Wow nice poem I really like it! :) well thanks for the coment and cute pro file BTW it's cute!