You're My Friend...right? *jess*

by Torn   Jan 2, 2006


*this poem is in reply to your poem hun (jess..) i love u..*

I can't stop reading this,
It's driving me insane,
I just want to hold you,
But it's crazy, I feel the same.

Except in my position,
I've been alone too long,
With no one who's there,
I just want to belong.

I feel something with you,
I trust you somehow,
I don't share that with others,
Not then, not now.

But you're strongly locked,
Behind you're brick wall,
You're utterly convinced,
That they will make you fall.

I know how that feels,
More than many do,
Been through it before,
God I can relate to you.

Been by your side for ever,
Even if you don't see.
Maybe I should have made it clearer,
That a friend was in me.

You're giving up so easy,
Is it not worth a try?
I know it will be hard,
Yes you will still cry.

But I need you babe,
Please be strong,
I just want to give you hope,
To realise this choice would be wrong.

What would be so bad?
In opening up to me?
Haven't I proved worthy?
You just don't want to see.

You want someone close,
Just as much as I do,
But you're so scared,
And I have no clue.

How do I show you?
That I just want to be friends,
You make me smile,
I could help you mend?

There's not much I can do,
To prove how my love is true.
To show how much I care,
About the one and only..you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    That was awesome! very touching.
    excellent job.

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Omg this girl needs to open her eyes! you are sooo supportive for her! God that is sooo great. your an amazing friend. i wish i had someone who was willing to help me just like you are for Jess. lyl~lex

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Awww this made me sad hun, friendships are very precious relationships and just being there for her would prove you care hun, you are an awwesome friend trust mee

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    A t0uchng piece. very well written. meaningful and t0uching keep it up

    l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Very beautiful poem girl! I loved it alot. It's so sweet and so sad =( Very well done sweety. Right from the heart again. Keep it up sweety, lotsaa love -xxx-