by Void Jan 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I saw you that day, |
Im lovin your poems, they are just Ferggen Great, that poem had a very nice flow and perfect rhythm, excellent rhymes, i dont think it could of been better, great job 5/5 |
by Cari
This is really sad but i kno how u feel, my bf cheated on me at a party that he went to with me. its very well written, the rymes sounded good together... 5/5 |
Wow this poem is awsome.. its so true that to some people the bonds of marrage just dont mean like anything.. and they are as flimsy as a peice of paper.. thanx you so much for comment on my poem "Dinner With Death" I really apreciate it. |
I liked this poem alot, it flowed well and was moving as well as captivating! Great write. |