I liked this poem alot, it flowed well and was moving as well as captivating! Great write.
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p.s thanks for your comments it was greatly appreciated, i wish all people would comment like that, instead of oh it didn't flow nice try though! or whatever else they come up with lol. I'll work on Broken on the Bathroom floor and when i've improved it i'll let you know and you can tell me what you think!
THANKS

Wow this poem is awsome.. its so true that to some people the bonds of marrage just dont mean like anything.. and they are as flimsy as a peice of paper.. thanx you so much for comment on my poem "Dinner With Death" I really apreciate it.

This is really sad but i kno how u feel, my bf cheated on me at a party that he went to with me. its very well written, the rymes sounded good together... 5/5

Im lovin your poems, they are just Ferggen Great, that poem had a very nice flow and perfect rhythm, excellent rhymes, i dont think it could of been better, great job 5/5