Comments : Forgetful breathing

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammi

    Speachless... it was very good
    -sam

  • 18 years ago

    by яock godеѕѕ

    ... Thats a really awsum poem good on u for writing this, people need to read feeling in a poem like this. 5/5 From me keep it up u have a great talent. check out some of my poems n tell me wat u think. Mwa x0x Nat x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by emma

    Hey i love your poem it is really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Life Is Beautiful

    Omg cara.....that was an amazing poem!!!

    i really liked it, and im sry we dont talk as much anymore, but i still will love u forever!!
    love always,
    Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Life Is Beautiful

    Miss u cara!