Wow, a lot of painful emotion in this one. Very well written.

i think i'm in love with you and its not easy
to walk away from someone you'd die for.

That is such a stong line, giving it all up for someone you know you love, but knowing you have to give them up as well. Keep writing, its beautiful.

Wow! This IS a masterpiece.. for people who can't be bother to read such a long poem, i tell u, every line is worth it! oh gosh, this is sooo beautiful! =)