Incomplete

by BrokenMisery   Jan 2, 2006


The last tears have fallen to a lost heart beat,
She is but a memory that is incomplete.
Hands; tattered in crimson spider webs,
Pouring and rushing in between broken threads.

The last tears have fallen to a lost heart beat,
The demons have conquered her soul in defeat.
To the fragile skeleton caged by flesh and skin,
The prison of a mortal has broken her in.

The last tears have fallen to a lost heart beat,
She is growing numb in silent retreat.
To a world that has left her with nothing sweet,
She is but a memory that is incomplete.

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  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hiya!

    I read this a few times as well, enjoyed it more every time I read it.
    Most meaningful words to me I guess had to be:
    She is but a memory that is incomplete.

    Another great powerful poem.
    Laterz,
    Shirlz

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    This is a wonderful poem! I had to read it three times...and each time i got it even more. At first i didn't quite understand but after i read it two more times it just seemed so deep and beautiful. I like how you just in three stanza's expressed so much! I especially loved the lines:

    "To the fragile skeleton caged by flesh and skin, The prison of a mortal has broken her in."

    It just really hit home for me. Wonderfully done. Your a really talented writer, keep up the awesome work!
    ~Luvz~
    ~Chica~

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Beautiful written. I loved every word of it. Very well done -xxx-

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