Woah, nice work. i really like this part about the clay and sculptor in the middle stanza....:

" I morph like the clay,
In the hands of a sculptor,
Who doesnt know what to make,
Who to please,
So he remakes his piece,
To please his every audience..."

good write.

I liike! it's so different than all of your other poems.. one thing that didn't seem up-to-par with your other poems was the flow.. there were a couple spots where I stumbled a little but it's little, nitpicky things. I think your content was awesome and the format(or lackthereof) was perfect for this piece. I'll just go from here...

And if I could,
I wouldnt be here with me either,

[if i could] - that makes it sound weird because u were talking about NOT doing something (being with you) and then you switch it up to if i could.. I'd say use couldn't so that it'd all match up, but that wouldn't really fit either.. hmm..

There are several me's,
For everyone I know,

the apostrophe makes the meaning clearer; mes is not a word used too often and for me was a little confusing without it..

ok.. onto more substantial comments..

I morph like the clay,
In -[the] hands of a sculptor,
Who doesnt know what to make,
Who to please,
So he remakes his piece,
To please his every audience,

I really like the message behind this. I think all you need is to maybe cut out a few words that are just 'there' and add more ideas to play on the concept of you, ever- changing. I put brackets around the words that I thought didn't contribute much to the overall quality..

Also, these lines talk about a sculptor.. I like the imagery (but still think it could use more "hands-on" imagery, especially for such a piece. Last line,.. I like it but I think it could be more poignant..

appeasing his every audience
with a malleable disposition.

That second line, I just added in to elaborate on more of what I was talking about. Doubtfully will you use the example, but hopefully you get what I'm saying..

Anyway.. I liked the last stanza, though the least of all three.. I like what you're saying but it seems like it's too hectic or chaotic - jumpy - for me.. I loved the overall conclusion th0,.. Basically I think this is a really good poem, and like I said before: If you took some time, I think it could be that much more of an awesome poem.. good stuff as always.. pZ out =O)

I rly enjoyed this...i love how you poured yourself out in this...

Lissa