Wow. I really loved this. The story it tels, very well done, I could see it happening right in front of me. You descibed it so beautiful and so detailed. Very beautiful. I'm impressed! And I also loved that you sometimes would repeat words, made it so powerful. Very well done! -xxx-

So different and true... this could also go under lost love...

i hope you will be okay :) not all the world can make you cry. there's some things the world has to offer than the afterlife of things. like love. some people say that when you go to heaven, hell, etc, you can never see your loved one again. you will forget them. with all my heart i dont believe in that because love is already part of heaven. but when it is lost, it feels like hell. always stay pure, stay gold, don't let the world take anything precious away from you. there's someone for everyone. i know it.

Beautiful, that's about all I can say. This poem speaks for itself. If you ask me, this is one of your best ones yet. Heartbreak is always terrible, but a wonderful girl like you will find someone to appreciate her one day. And it will be well worth the wait.

Amazing stunning superb! dont worry you will find someone else just have faith. *hugs* i also luv the detail. take care XXXXX
JL

That is so wierd, I can like hear your voice when I'm reading this poem. Like I can totally picture you saying somethieng like that. Great poem, lala
-Just another adoring fan!