Hey i liked your poem it was really good but i didn't quite understand who they was....did this person take you from someone else. It just confused me alittle bit! But i liked it! Take a look at some of my poems and comment if you like! thanks

I understand the whole poem. I think you should title it "Shredded My Love"

THIS POEM IS ABOUT MY DAD AND THEY ARE MY FAMILY OUT HERE

Wow lots of emotion in this poem.. love it tho thanks for commenting on my poems..
love always Tiffany Heather