Great poem baby, you really did a good job appealing to other people's emotions and feelings to experess your own. Yeah, I answered yes, so I know where you are coming from hun. If you are looking for support, from a stanger that would rather be a friend, I am willing and wanting to give you a hand. |
by Stephy
Hey hunn, very good, i have to admit i answered yes to all of those...I hope you're okay... |
by Hayley
Hey, this is a great poem, I love it, I’ve lived it and it sucks, living it does, I hope you can find a way to be happy, not all bodys are perfect I’m loving it where I am, and no I’m not 100 pounds but I’m not fat. And neither are you, I once thought at 125 I was, but in reality everyone else is too thin, your fine just the way you are and cutting solves nothing, for me it landed me in counseling and an institution. If you ever need to talk I’m always here for you, hugs-hayley |
by Hayley
God stupid computer its suposed to be i have lived it,...i am lovin it...i am not 100.....but I am not fat...lol.... and i am always here to talk,....again great poem, hugs- hayley |
Aww, hope your life isn't really like that, it's a great poem though, some typo's u need to look at. But really good, I liked it hun, 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
Cool poem, really deep, sad and amazingly written. Keep it up |
by Torn
The most depressing thing is that's exactly what we're doing..giving ourselves up to misery..and everyone deserves better than that. |
by Razorblade
Incredible poem Sabrina! 5/5 Very deep and meaningful. |
by Roxy
Hey!!!!! |
by Rena
Hey. all you ppl saying you are here for her stop lying. because you really arnt. |
Omg i know how you feel hunni, this was a beautifully sad poem i guess that's because it's true for me aswell. But things will get better for you hun i really hope you're ok xxx |
Beautiful poem.... u tell it like it is! |
by Jasmyn
I dont cut myself but ive tried to kill myself by pills a couple of times. obviously it didnt work, anyway- i wanted to let you know i know how it feels to live in misery and if there is anything i can do to help- just message me or something. great poem. |
Love it rated a 5 perfect |
by Juls
That gave me chills up my back cause I did answer the questions yes and just its an amazing poem you have wrote. I love your work and keep up the great work |
by ratchild666
This is really great. i like how it asks questions, allowing the reader to make the poem apply to their own life. the concept is emotional and really effective. |
by JL
Beautiful poem. I answered yes to every question but one. Gets a person thinking though *hugs* hope you feel better soon. take care XXXXX |
by Dreams
'that you forgave those times they mad you sad' Do you mean 'make me sad?' |
by Dani
OMG. that is exactly how i feel most of the time. your a great writer too. but its really sad if u feel that way. any ways dont do anything stupid. your fantastic poems would be missed if u do. |
by hm
Hey....that was so good...i read it and felt like you read my mind...well im always here if you wanna talk...take care and no that you will get thro this...lOvE... JoSiE...Hm..... |