Give It A Try

by End Of Eternity   Jan 2, 2006


Yet another year passed by
another year i feel close to my end
time will never stop for anyone
& i'll give another try to find in you, a friend

this hope that we have in between us
is the only last chance, i'll explore again
this dream that is still breathing in between us
is the only cure to my everlasting pain

make me feel beautiful this year
for once just give these arms a chance to surround you
let my strength overshadow your fear
for once just let this phase of life fade through

we just can't be like any other lover
who realizes what they had after they say goodbye
how can we ever be like any other?
regretting lifetime rather than giving another try

let's burn each other with that touch
before this year passes by
as time will never stop for anyone
so let's give it a try

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  • 17 years ago

    by oksana

    I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    What a beautiful poem. I love the hope that is in this piece. Imagery is wonderful.

    let's burn each other with that touch
    before this year passes by
    as time will never stop for anyone
    so let's give it a try

    These lines just touch the heart. How could this not move someone.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Very thoughtful and very heartfelt poem. You see, you did know how to be positive before me. lol... Keep that attitude forever. Loved the poem.

    Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Aww how sweet!! i love it!!
    all the best for you this year nitin, i know you deserve it.
    Im sorry we've lost touch a bit...i promise to stay in touch more=)
    take care
    love,
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Hello Nitin ,

    Great poem ,yes its better to give ones relationship a second chance rather than say goodbye and regret whole life.
    very well written.

    Best regards
    chavii,

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