Goodbye

I've been in love with so many guyz
and had to come up with a lot of goodbyes.

But when i met you I knew
you were the one that I could call you my honeybun.

And then time and time
you would play around

Then i knew it had to end
So gets to packing my dear love

And don't come back cause I want take you in

So GOODBYE my old friend I guess i have to move on.

please comment on my poem because this had really meaned something to me when this happened thank you